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教Jackie写作

已有 82 次阅读2021-4-13 23:12 |个人分类:北美生活

 

Jackie写作 Teach Jackie writing

 

 

Aug 20, 2016 at 7:02 PM

 

 

 

亲爱的习和王要我讲俄国,我没去过,我好想去俄国土地如此广大,俄国没有高铁,就是有高铁出去旅行,也会坐得很久天昏天黑地的!据Jackie的俄国大帅哥朋友说,他们去过世界各地,莫斯科很不错,他喜欢!这边从莫斯科来的俄国人,到美国来过什么样的日子,只有自己知道.  想去看圣彼得堡,hermitage, 冬宫想去看莫斯科,想去看黑海,里海,还记得父亲照片里同船操桨的那一位美丽的俄罗斯姑娘想去看乌克兰,白俄罗斯立陶宛,去看那一片无边无际的森林,西伯利亚!喜欢他们的克瓦斯,冰淇淋,黑面包,各种蔬菜做的酱想看他们男孩子跳的有趣的哥萨克舞!如果习主席还能劈叉,也许习主席还能有本事跳那种舞. 88 嘿嘿嘿,我可以看王用手指跳!哈哈哈 想去看他们的大教堂,看他们的芭蕾舞,看他们的油画艺术当然好多帅哥,美女让你去看..... 88,我一进小学,开始认字,爸爸就叫我写日记,因为他说写作是非常重要的技能. Jackie到现在我一直没有让她写什么,她在学校里写得怎么样我也不太清楚可是我知道在美国大多数孩子的写作是不怎么样的,因为我听过一位大学老师在抱怨,新入学孩子们根本没有写作的技能.  你们每天给她讲那么多历史人物,我希望她能够根据你们给她讲的历史人物的背景故事事件,写她自己的对这些历史人物的感想你们能 跟我合作吗?因为我想知道你们对她讲了什么,然后我会问她脑子里有什么概念,怎么产生这些概念的,用什么事实去支撑这些概念,最后的结论是怎么出来的帮她把写作的结构理清楚,命题,简单介绍,和支持个例,最后结论那她就知道怎么去写文章了多试几下,那她以后就会自己写了!经过自己头脑思考的,她就会去想结构,想怎么用词,想怎么生动吸引人,想怎么结尾有力她如果自己会写,以后就不会有像川普太太抄别人演讲稿的事情发生了会演讲的人一般心里都会自己打一点底稿,我希望她能够会讲话,会写. 88,那是王最最擅长的,最最知名的才能呀!我想起那些年冬天,爸爸半夜下班回来,把我从床上叫起来,一段一段帮我改文章的画面当时心里是很反感的,可是后来我写作文,却是经常得奖的请合作,问她要,好吗?

 

Dear Xi and Wang want me to talk about Russia, I have never been there, I want to go. Russia is so vast, Russia does not have high-speed rail, even there were a high-speed rail to travel, it would sit inside train for a long time! According to Jackie's Russian big guy friend, they have been to the world, Moscow is very good, he likes it! Here,  Russians from Moscow, what kind of life after they have come to the United States, only they know. I want to see St. Petersburg, hermitage, the Winter Palace. I want to go to Moscow, I want to see the Black Sea, the Caspian Sea, I still remember the boat in my father’s photo. The beautiful Russian girl who is paddling. I want to see Ukraine, Belarus, Lithuania, and see the endless forest, Siberia! Like their kvass, ice cream, brown bread, and a variety of vegetables made as sauce. Want to see their boys dancing with the funny Cossacks! If President Xi can still make split, maybe President Xi can have the ability to dance that kind of dance. 88 Hey, I can watch Wang dancewith his fingers! Hahaha wants to see their church, watch their ballet, and see their oil painting art. Of course, a lot of handsome guys, beautiful women  to see..... 88, when I wasin primary school, began to recognize words, my father askedme to write a diary because he said that writing is a very important skill. I hasven't let Jackie write anything until now. I don't know how well she writes at school. But I know that most children in the United States don't write. How, because I have heard a college teacher complaining that the new coming children have basically no writing skills. You tell her so many historical figures every day, I hope she can follow the background story of the historical characters you told her. The event, write her own feelings about these historical figures. Can you cooperate with me? Because I want to know what you said to her, then I will ask her what concepts are in her mind, how to generate these concepts, what facts to use to support these concepts, and  how to come out the final conclusion. Help her to write clear structure, proposition, brief introduction, and support cases, the final conclusion. Then she knows how to write an article. Try a few more, then she will write it herself later! After thinking about her own mind, she will think about the structure, how to use words, how to be vivid and attractive, and how to end  powerfully. If she can write it herself, there will be no future things like Mrs. Trump copying other people's speeches. It happened. People who speak will generally make a little manuscript in their own heart. I hope she can speak and write. 88, that is the best and best known talent of Wang! I remember those winters, my father came back from work in the middle of the night, called me out of bed, and helped me change the article for a while. I was very disgusted at the time, but later I wrote my essay,  I often won  prize. Please cooperate. Ask her, okay?


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